Шея (складки на ней, на мой взгляд, очень резко прочерчена. Или все эти черные контуры потом уберутся?

Изначально я хотела сделать покраску с четкими границами теней (как в аниме и оставить черный контур. Но всё опять свелось к привычной для меня более мягкой покраске. А при этой покраске черный контур смотрится слишком резко. Но и убирать его мне не хочется. Буду думать...

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Tyger! Tyger! burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
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William Blake

Oh my...I just notice this one! Since you post the sketch, I´ve been waiting for some colored version and didn´t notice it at all! Ouh, I´m so inattentive! How come I missed Wish´s picture in colors?
Anyway, I really like it. The black color suits him well, he´s very elegant
But...just wondering... He´s an incarnation of Wishary´s body, isn´t he? Isn´t it strange, that he has black hair, while "the original" was blonde?
(I don´t say dark hair not suit him...it´s just a point )

Wow, you are very penetrated! This is a fundamental issue of my story.

Creating of Philosophers' stone consists of three key phases: decay, distillation and transmutation. Decay is called ‘nigredo’ (black phase), distillation – ‘albedo’ (white phase), transmutation – rubedo (red phase). My three heroes are not just parts of one person – they are phases of Philosophers’ stone. That’s why Vish has black eyes and hair and wear only black dress; Shar has gray eyes and white hair and wear only white; and Ary has light brown eyes and red hair and wear only red.

But that's not the half of it. I want to show that because of their unusual descent they are incomplete persons (and they feel it). It’s not only because of their feelings but bodily defects too: Vish is mute, Shar is deaf and Ary is blind. Symbolism, heh!

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Tyger! Tyger! burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
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William Blake

Ouh, I hope you didn´t mind "penetrated" in negative, I don´t want to bother you, dear
Anyway, your story is really interesting. You´re keen on alchemy a lot, aren´t you?

No-no, I don’t mind it at all. Vice versa! There is a Russian joke: Pigeon is a pride bird – he doesn’t fly until you kick him! I’m this pigeon - need a good kick too

I read about alchemy (and astrology) a lot because I always have been charmed with ancient theories and their explanations of physical phenomenon. It’s so fascinating!
Right now I’m reading ‘Tempted by astrology’ and ‘Sacral geometry’ – I need them for CorSpiAni. I want to tie alchemy and astrology with clasical geometry.

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Tyger! Tyger! burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
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William Blake

I´m the same, dear. Also need a big of kick for doing anything!
Anyway, I´m really looking forward to see a newspaper headline: "CorSpiAni-the new Russian bestseller!" I´m absolutely sure that your story is perfect! I wish you a loads of luck with it! (And to enjoy working on it, it´s very important to like your "job" )

*I´m really looking forward to see a newspaper headline: "CorSpiAni-the new Russian bestseller!"*

Oh, you really made my day! Dreams, dreams... But I'm quite serious about this story so maybe one day... Heh! Anyway thank you a lot for your supporting - it's really important. I can prove it - because of you today I finished Ary. So thanks again!

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Tyger! Tyger! burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
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William Blake

Your welcome as always, dear! I thank you that you shared a bit of your world with me!